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Commission for :iconjimraynorhyperion: I would like to thank :iconvixyhooves: for the binary code to make the cutie mark. The drink is her cup could be tea or coffee.
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Well, this is certainly new.

Vision: I think that it was awesome of you to do this for your friend, and just the subjects certainly an eye opener.

Originality: Let me just say that I have done some couple dozen critiques, and this is the first I have ever done with a pregnant pony in it. Ido like the idea of it, and it certainly is ground that I haven't broken before. Having said that, I think it's a bit weird for a pony in Equestria to have a binary code as a cutie mark. That would imply that not only are computer programmers a thing that exists in Equestria, but that they are behind us by a considerable margin (assuming here that they still use BASIC, which we abandoned in the 90's). It is redeemed a bit by the fact that she is a unicorn, as any technology more sophisticated than a locomotive has to be powered by magic (according to Faust herself.)

Technique: very good work here, and I like the detail you put into her overall appearance. Having said that, her front legs look a little too short when compared to her hind legs, but that's a nit barely worth breaking out the steel comb for.

Impact: This one hit me like a ton of bricks, and not just because of the fact that she's pregnant. Her overall design doesn't look too flashy or overdone, like some other OCs I've seen, and that is always a plus towards a character making a good, lasting impression.

Overall: A well designed character, and definitely plumbing new depths as far as content in this fandom is concerned. Keep it up, and keep in mind what I said about the cutie mark for future reference. Feel free to comment if you disagree with anything.
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:icond715:
I want to tell you, you're drawing there bumps too big.

pregnancy for ponies/horses are more or less design to not hinder there movements
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~JimRaynorHyperion Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
no, he's drawing them right. this is how a pony looks when pregnant but it might look weird since ponies/horses don't normally lay down. don't believe me? google it in images.
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:icond715:
I see, my bad

wend I did googled it the first they were all standing
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~JimRaynorHyperion Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
eeyup, ponies/horse always stands, even when sleeping. its because if they lay down, it will be very hard for them to get up because how their legs are made. in this picture, thats how a new born will be doing until it start walking. least my high school animal knowledge is still working x3
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:icond715:
its more of a "so they can run away if a predictor is near" than anything else
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~VixyHooves Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Heeee ty for the art and ty raynor as always <3 her cutiemark while binary actually has a meaning if used exactly like the refrence sheet (the code works out to be MLP) 4th wall break <,<

and yay coffee and cookies <3
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~Dragon-of-fury Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww
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*Tallieee Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
How many points would this cost?
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*xniclord789x Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It costs 160 points, but I'm not accepting any more since commission box is closed.
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