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Now, the only thing I was told to do was just draw Berry Punch pregnant. You kind of left me hanging since I have no idea what to do for her, but I'll come up something eventually. Since she is a background pony, and the only thing I recognize her is she drank the punch in a party. I did some research, and found pictures where she is drunk. Wine Taster? Or drinker? Don't know, but it did gave me ideas. We can't have her drinking while pregnant. So the idea for this picture is, she is a Wine Taster. She was invited by one of the famous ponies to go wine tasting, but then they got carried away. She realized she's pregnant, and the one who impregnate her ran away because he knew. She looks for him around the city. As she looks out the window, she promised to never to drink again. Then, somepony shows up behind her. It's that stallion. He always loved her, but just afraid how things turn out like that. He doesn't want the press all up on him because of this, but he doesn't care anymore. He would ask her to marry him. And she accepts. The End.
The Alternate version is where she finds him, and the dialog I came up between is really complex. Stop running. He breaks and would tell that he loves her, but can't have it this way. "You expect so much, just because of the foal. I have thought about us, and I don't think it will work out at the end." As things gets more serious. She realizes that she had a thing for him in the beginning as well. Why did you choose me? And he would bring it back, why accept? At the end, they would come down, and they would get together. The End.
Eh, I could have wrote a fan fiction, the idea I have is interesting, even the dialog I came up is complex, but just the brief information we need based around this picture. I hope you enjoy. P.S. She carries one Foal.
I wonder which plot you like best? lol
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